the last battle god

while I don't like literal romance with weapons surprisingly this doesn't tick me off

Interesting story so far can't wait to see where it goes

Female lead?.............................

very interesting book keep y interesting wonderkng whats next

As always it is good and curiousty increases for next chapter

Writer here, this is my first webnovel. It's a culmination of years of procrastinating to finally write something and I'm proud of it.I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it and I hope to create something even greater in the future.

So the MC dies after seeing his GF out with another man. he then proceeds to get OP but remains loyal even when a vampire lady offers herself quoting he has someone to get back to. this tanked the character design for me because he owed that gf nothing. there wasn't enough relationship buildup for me to care, no trials they overcame other than he was lonely. the loyalty he gives her is not warranted. everything else would make this a great story. slight grammar issues but nothing you won't find in other novels.

Disclaimer: I don't normally write reviews without reading much more chapters, but since the work doesn't have any others I'll give it a start. BTW I'm leaving this review at Ch. 17.The writing quality is excellent as well as the characters that you meet. There is a lot of things that aren't mentioned at the beginning which seems a little lazy, but it might also be a method of making you think about things and want to read more to answer your questions. Can't say much about background as you don't see much at the moment. Though the update schedule seems quite concerning. Definitely has potential and has a good start, a few clichés here and there, but those make a good novel if used right. Honestly I think it will be a good novel at least and hope the author continues to make it work. Good Luck to you author! P.S. If it gets up to Ch. 100 someday I'll make another review then.