The Hidddn Marriage

Details are okay and intriguing. Typos are there and it’s inevitable

really nice story though the Grammer and writing quality takes a bit of brainpower to understand it's still a greats story overall.abcdefghijklmonpqrstuvwxyz

Quite an interesting story, transitioning from the murim to a fantasy world. I really like it! Keep up the great work.

I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good.I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters.I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels.But I would like to say that you should work on world-building.Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.

Dear Caramelsugar,Your writing always amazes me .The way you portray your characters  is incredible.The way you play with your words is 👌👌Keep up the amazing work CaramelYours,Admirer

"Alright Jester." Dark Looking in the black cauldron.

"Doko! I'm glad! You are okay!!!" She said at first. Then, suddenly her voice changed. It was as if she was crying.

<p>"Tiada isu dengan Perantau Malam yang kita lakukan. Prestasi yang ditunjukkannya sangat menakjubkan seperti gurunya masa muda dahulu." Raja Elven Agung itu berkata dengan tenang.</p>