the forgotten man

nice story Friend very interesting plot waiting for more

gonna rate it 4.0 stars for now.. the translation still needs some work, but it's getting better. like with the names and how who is actually talking kinda confuses the reader. but overall keep up the good work 👍.

"It's okay to be afraid, to have weaknesses. Everyone has them." Even I had a weakness, my family and friends. But can't tell him that. I can understand him, I wouldn't want someone to see me weak either. He took a deep breath, "How come you don't have any?"

He's king in introspecting me! So, I think there's no need of reading out this letter again. He behaves as if he did masters in psycology. He can understand what I will be thinking at a moment,just by looking at my gestures, facial expressions...etc. That is why I always pretend to be careful with him.

"if I kill you, everyone will HAVE to respect me" he then tried to pull the trigger but the bullet stopped mid air, Ghost was enraged, He slowly walked to the kid, Earth shattering beneath his feet with every step "he then gave the kid a single glance and used his Gravity abilities without moving, forcing the boy to fall face first into the ground unable to move and he broke the boys legs and arms as well without moving, only using his gravity, the crowd started whispering again

(Pov?)

I shake my head and look down at my chest. It is caked with blood but all my wounds have been healed leaving only barely visible scars. In fact even my body looks a bit more masculine. "Mako what kind of potion did you use on me?" Mako began to fiddle with it's fingers "Uh... Mako not sure?" My eyes go wide "You mean to tell me you used a potion that you didn't know the effects of?!" Mako lowered it's head like a child being reprimanded

(Malalaman na ba ni elsa na buhay pa ang isa nyang anak)