The Echo of a False Hero

OMG 😩😩😩😩😩 MORE RN RN I SAYYYY 🤺🤺🤺 Also I totally didnt send this to about 20 people I know so uh, good luck with that  (^-^)bsdafsdhgfhkd

I love this! You have created such a great world and characters. I love that your curse is not simple and how haunting the visual is. Keep up the great writing!

I was just checking if the story was good and the author didn't disappoint me with the story line. The only problem is that, the update is very slow 😭. Please update more.

As of now I really like the story. The setup is good, the world building seems solid though there are still some things to be left unexplained which I believe is on purpose and to be found out later. The character design is really well done as the way the characters react and interact with each other is totally logical given the information and experiences they have. Though there are some obvious things people don’t explain, yet where you as a reader will screaming to TELL THEM RIGHT NOW!! But alas such is the life of a reader that just knows things and has a sixth sense called flags for these things.What I think makes this novel stand out is that you really live and feel the anxiousness of the main character from early on, wondering the same things she does and feeling anxious with her. What I really like is the way she cares for her brother and goes all out for him even though she has her secrets like many others in this novel seem to have. She is a character that will take action and I can’t wait to see how everything will turn out and how she will grow to be during the rest of this novel.She is also very contradicting but in a logical way that does not seem strange at all. She has a nice mix of how she was, wants to be, plans to be and actually is. She is a person and I like that.And while this story seems to have some drama and some at first glance annoying characters, nothing is what is seems at first glance. The nosy annoying one might be a good friend while the caring one might me a b (I won’t  curse here). The steady calm one might be selfish, the grumpy one could be kind and the loud one might just be that; very loud and annoying ready to create drama. You never know what to expect from the characters, and your first impression could be entirely wrong, or right. You just have to read on and let the writer take you on a journey acros her apocalypse together with Rose and her brother Ethan.Keep writing author, I would love to read more chapters as that is the only thing that pains me, as I cannot keep reading now that I have caught up.

With the silence of the class, Mamat begin to read the prayer.

So we opened the door a little bit for us to see it together, and just like what JN said he never notice it.

Mary was the only daughter who remained at home; and she was necessarily drawn from the pursuit of accomplishments by Mrs. Bennet's being quite unable to sit alone. Mary was obliged to mix more with the world, but she could still moralize over every morning visit; and as she was no longer mortified by comparisons between her sisters' beauty and her own, it was suspected by her father that she submitted to the change without much reluctance.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb