The Dual Zenith

An amazing fic so far, I'm excited to see how the Harry and Ares interaction plays out.----------------------------------------------------

Overall very very good start, I immensely enjoy this concept. Feel like this one has the most potential to be honest. I especially like how accurate the mc is for the synopsis. Very good.

Melihat sarah yang memaksa ingin keluar rajendra segera menyalakan mesin dan melajukan kendaraannya dengan kecepatan tinggi satibanya di jalan raya yang membuat sarah terkejut dan berhenti berontak.''apa kamu gila?" tanya sarah kesal bercampur takut.

I could see puddles of blood everywhere I looked. They weren't leaving anything to live in this area of nature. This isn't how nature should be treated in any world.

"I just wanted to use the swing, and he wouldn't get off even though I asked him to," I say. It's more or less a repetition of the last thing I said, but I feel like everything that comes out my mouth is just wet and slimy and sticky. The words won't cooperate at all, and I don't know how to explain how unfair Jeremy was being. My head feels like it's filled with smoke.

I nodded after adjusting his coo* size..

"Wait, hold on!" He immediately attempted to struggle out of Nel's grip, but her arms were like vices.

assistant lin quiang was awake... as he opens his eyes, he began to search for his master Zach wei .