the Brilliant Duchess

I'm honestly shocked at how unrecognised this is when novel's with far worse grammar and plot have millions of views. Your writing is a breath of fresh air.

I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?

Well described ,with good storytelling I feel like I'm watching a move, great jop keep going

She ring the bell and bus stops at the next station now she have to walk all the way back to the previous stop, she cursed herself for being so careless.

Only shooting stars

Something seemed to snap within my mind, and my mind was lost in the darkness.

There was a finality in his tone that took both Kuroka and Koneko aback. It was said like an oath, a promise, a finality, and that was exactly what it was. He would not let anything happen, and to prove his resolve, he opened his hand and searched deep within himself, connecting to the principalities of faith.

Gaze downcast, she slowly made her way to her bed where Koneko was lying over and sat her back against the bedframe. Even if she lost the right to hold and comfort her only remaining family member, she could at least stay by Koneko's side for as long as possible.