The Bloodline System

I don't know why the author decided to write a bloodline system novel when he obviously does not care about the bloodlines or abilities. While the novel in itself is good, the author constantly leaves out the descriptions of new skills and bloodlines and leaves us trying to pick up the pieces in our heads . Like he will kill some people and get their bloodline but he won't mention what they are for like 20 chapters.
When he kills like 20 criminals and then sits down to combine them the author shows like one combination and then just throws in a line like "Then I combined 4 other abilities" and then like never mentions it again. If your gonna write a system novel, you should put effort into showing us what bloodlines he collects and creates. You would think that would be a big part of something literally named the bloodline system. But I guess no, the author just jumps over crucial details for no real reason. Also when he combines abilities the system tells him how compatible they are, but no matter what it says the mc always combines it anyway.

Also For the first 200 chapters the mc like doesn't take other peoples bloodlines unless they attack him, like why can't he go out and hunt criminals or something. he can get unlimited bloodlines but he only takes like 4. WHY????

Don't get me started on the random abilities the system gives him like dash for no other reason than being a system novel. Would be a lot cooler if the mc got his abilities more from bloodlines then random system powerups. Again the author should just put more of a focus on the bloodlines. Why write a story focused on them then just gonna ignore them. Leaves me confused and disappointed.

I'm shameless but in this situation I'm not. Just because it's a system story don't mean it's gonna be cliche.
I always bring new, unique and something fresh to the table. The plot, the characters, scenes, world background, expect all these to be mind-blowing.
I don't like to info dump so you'll have to read more to know about a some things.
Your feedback determines if this is gonna be dropped or continued.
Peace out ✊

Review based on what i have read so far ( chapter 60+)
It's my personal opinion so if you have anything against on what I'm going to say you can write your own review

1. the world background- can't say much since the story is in early stage. So far I like how the author described the world setting, events and characters interaction.
2. pacing of the story- as a reader, personally, i feel like the author did a great job regulating this. It's not so slow where you'll be skipping words for unwanted fillers. It's not so fast where you'll feel like you missed out something. It's the best a reader can ask for, we'll, aside from the cliffhangers.
3. MC's character development- looking at things the way they progressed. His character development is understandable for me, for short i like the way the mc progress. He's a bit edgy at times, it's expected given how he lived his life up to this point. Hoping there will be some progress between him and a certain someone, i will not give a name but she's very likeable.
4. MC's system- there are not much interaction between the mc and the system unlike other novels. It has its own advantages for the mc just like every other mc, but it's not up to the point where i will call it OP. MC still has to do his part to gain something.
5. Characters surrounding the mc- they are not plain to read. They have their own depth and mystery that will make you want to know more about them. Of course, we can't forget about the stepping stones for our mc, some of them are stupid as usual while some are smart and think for themselves when to back out- unlike the stupid ones.

The mc is ruthless and i like it, im not really into naive and goody-two-shoes kind. Realistically speaking, if you look at every great person at the top in our current world despite their different attitudes they all have similarities if you study them. Yes they act and do good things to look good in front of us but is that really there is? No, i think not, they're just good at hiding their worse side from our plain eyes. Every person at the top knew both the black and white of life.
As what Niccolo Machiavelli said "a wise prince should be both fear and love".

Here's my review about this novel (chapter 1 to 18):
First, The MC did not transmigrate from nowhere nor reincarnation of someone. So it's normal if the MC is childish or a bit immature from the start but I think it will get better.

Second, MC family consist of 4 people including him of course, his mother, father and I think a ten year old brother. But they literally ignore MC's existence due to his bloodline is lower than F rank while his brother has an A rank bloodline so the MC's parents dotes on his younger brother so much.

Third, the world background is easy to understand and there's no war happening between the two kind of races; human & skarlovs and mixed bloods from the time being or in the surface pft. But discrimination about race and bloodline are common thing and too strong even ignoring their child just because of a very low bloodline.

Fourth, MC's system is a bit strict or not just a bit lol. It have a daily, weekly, monthly and yearly quest but the reward is also reasonable. There are 7 attributes that are strength, speed, agility, perception, bravery, charm, intelligence.

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I almost give up this novel because of the paragraph of Gustav in the first chapter. I am almost a sinner, author please forgive me. Your novel is so satisfying, can't wait for your update.

Sigh, it's my first time to write too many words. So please, support the novel for many chapters. I want to read it so bad.

no harem = 5☆




















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I saw the tag no harem so automatic 5 star
Harem Is so disgusting i mean it depicted women are just decoration for Men to greatness
Thanks For your hark work author❤️❤️

grammer, maybe a few here and there, English isn't my first language nor am i too proficient so as long as it's readable and fluid then i really don't care for the small mistakes so 5/5.

character design, the character design is dog shit. it's too bad, even most eastern fantasy novels aren't that bad, i don't even know where to start...actually i do, i will start from the very first few paragraphs. the author starts with a "glimpse" of the future of how in 3 years the MC is gonna be op and guess what the people chant his name as? they call him "crimson lord" dude, the cringe level was so high it covered me like a coat, it would have been ironically less edgy if the people chanted "edge lord" lmao.

he took the "im trash so i get abused and bullied" way too fuken far and he didn't give valid excuses yet. forget committing suicide, I'm surprised that he's alive, and for someone as "trash" as him, why does everybody put so much energy into torturing him and putting him an inch away from life and their lives revolve around it like wtf?!

also, the author like to tell rather than show, he says that the mc is smart but the mc keeps on doing dumb and stupid things.

when it comes to other characters, if they aren't literally trying to kill the mc ust because he has a "trash" power, they are shitting on him about why he still didn't kill himself. and all of them are very obnoxious like holy shit, i would have killed myself whether i have a strong or weak power by virtue of me having to hear these people talk on a daily basis.
that goes for the system too, it's annoying as ****. overall 3/5 just cuz i think there is potential for the story and i don't want to lower the rating too much

stability...well it's pretty stable let's hope it stays that way, for now, there haven't been too many chapters.5/5

story development, i like the fact that it's gonna have to do with space soon enough and meeting new species so on and so forth and that's mostly where the 4 starts to come from, i took only 1 star which is something very generous as what we saw in the first chapter as a glimpse to the future was hella cringe but i can see many ways the author can improve upon it so by the time it's the period where the glimpse of the future showed, he could change things so it isn't as cringe. also, the story is very very forced, like a constipated person trying to take a shit.

i'm really liking it so far, 9 chapters in. i'm not good at reviewing, but as far as i can tell it's a good novel. my only gripe is that the mc is very stupid and annoying. i've read that this changes though, and that there's some character development. just kind of annoying with his hypocrisy, about how he doesn't hate his brother because society shaped him that way, yet he hates his classmates who are the exact same as his brother. actually, his brother is probably worse.