Tangled with the fated mates

بختاور نے مہارت کے ساتھ ناقابل فراموش کرداروں کے ساتھ  ایک سچائی پر مبنی کہانی بنائی ہے جو گہرائی سے گونجتے ہیں۔  بیانیہ کی رفتار قارئین کو مصروف رکھتی ہے، تناؤ کے لمحات اور خود شناسی کو بغیر کسی رکاوٹ کے توازن میں رکھا

I see potential in ur novel , the chapters are flawless , Less words , but better setting and writing , MC's personality is a bit interesting , I'll wait for daily updates , And hope you'll continue on the same path

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

I woke up to the sound of my alarm going off. I looked around my new room and thought "Well...new school here i come". I got out of bed and opened the curtains to let in some sunlight, even though it was 6:00 in the morning. I went to my bathroom and took a shower. After the 30 minute shower i put on some pj's. Then I brushed my teeth,washed my face, and combed my hair. After i did all of that I stared at myself in the mirror. I have long black hair that stop about my butt. My eyelashes are long and my eyes are flirty. I have tanned skin and perfect teeth. My lips are plump and shaped perfectly. My body is slim and thighs are thick, but not too thick. My butt is shaped just right. People say I am beautiful. And in some ways I believe them. I do not think too highly of myself.  After observing myself I change into my clothes. I put on light blue high waisted ripped jeans and a red crop top along with my red and white jordans to match. I walk downstairs and see my mother and father eating breakfast at the table in the kitchen."Goodmorning mom and dad" I say. "Goodmorning hun" my mom says. "Goodmorning Snowflake" says my dad. I go and grab my breakfast of bacon, pancakes, grits, eggs, and toast. I was beginning to start eating when I heard "LITTLE SISTER!!!". I jump out of my seat and into my brothers arms. "What are you two doing here?" I asked.

"I believe everyone is here. So I would like everyone to settle down." The noise of the students simmered down. The man cleared his throat then he looked at students with such intimidating and serious eyes.

As he said that, Ori noticed the shock on the faces everyone present, especially his attacker. Even though Ori had no idea who this young arrogant man was everyone else clearly did.

Everything just kept me looking forward to what is next. Starting from the title itself. All I can say is the storyline Is great and believe this is going to be a great one in time to come. Keeping going author 👌👌👌 I'm waiting for more updates from you

The cover of this book is too dull, a little request that you add something to spice it up. I lost interest in reading the book because of its cover but when I read the first chapter, it was so interesting that I had to take a cup of tea. You deserve a clap 👏👏👏👏👏👏. Brave author