Sweet Emily And The Banished Demon

I like the story. The issue I'm having is that The author is repeating themselves over and over again by writing the same thing in different ways. There are entire chapters that are written about something that would take maybe a paragraph. Half the time you can read the first paragraph and then skim the entire rest of the chapter and still understand very clearly what happened. Other than that, I like the idea of the story. I like the writing of the story, but too much expounding on things that don't matter much.

hi Autor if you could open a patreon where you post your novel, i would love to read it. Even for some money, but the prices on webnovel are just too high

Herald, looking shocked

But, what really troubled the little girl is because of-

The Inner Court disciples all attacked the duo as they took every hit with their bodies, small wounds from swords, spears and other weapons appeared slowly on their bodies as they took out countless enemies before them

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Karin smiled. "I did. But I changed my mind."

"Shhh, stop do hear that?" Claire stop them and staring at the giant tree in front of them. They hear low growls and heavy breathing of an animal.