Star Immortal

not a bad read..
I like it

not that good especially towards the end he becomes completely hateful and romance is thrash

This is very promisimg cultivation novel. I'd say it's almost at the same level as Coiling dragon. only some editing needs to be done because of little mistakes.

Synopsis says mc wants just simple farming life, which isn't true at all so that can be actually ignored. mc has no fixed goal at the beginning and his goals change based on how much he knows about the world.

He's ruthless towards those that try to annoy him or harm him. he's little childish sometime but very few times.

Something i can't understand from this novel that happens in other novels too but this magnifies it is that there are cultivators that are like 30-100 years old (especially in the tournament) and they still act as if they are in their teens and are very arrogant without any reasoning. only the leaders of empires and high ranking elders have brains. brains don't come with the authority but with experience and time so why everyone else is so stupid?

I like the cultivation aspect of the novel but some things are very complicated, like mc has so many things in his body and different abilities that i will forget those and where they came from so it would be great to create an auxiliarity chapter to explain every skill he has since chapter 1 and where he got them from. update tbe list as he gains more abilities etc.

Also as i'm at the current latest chapters when he broke through Core formation realm, mc isn't really using the AI anymore. I understand that as he gains Intelligence because of his high soul level and cultivation level he can calculate things as fast as the AI can but I still feel like the AI isn't useless and he isn't using it to it's full potential.

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Nice Fantasy Novel

Sensational
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A very determined, somewhat ruthless main character that drives the story beautifully. The beginning is captivating and from that point on, it gets even better. Worth it to read every word.

English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient.

This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through .

First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users.

It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright.

The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.

It's an interesting take on the transmigrator with an A.I. chip story, but the writing is very low quality and repetitive. The MC is portrayed as smart and calculating but the stories first plot twist is just dumb and makes no sense with how the story was headed. If this story gets edited, then I would recommend it but as it is this should be a pass.