Riddle of the Misty Bridge

this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

         Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

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I love how you’ve woven secrets and romance together in your story. The tension between the characters is palpable, and each revelation adds depth to the plot. You’ve created a world that feels both familiar and mysterious.

Shameless 5-star review from author. I hope you guys like my Novel.

I hurriedly took my bag from the counter asked the person in charge—

What's NEXT =:

"something like... killing a monster"he replied