PHANTOM LEGACY: The Rise of a New Syndicate

hello all give some love and support to this story I know i am not a professional writer but you know what this story will make you curious and engage that's my promise and there will be slow burn romance slow means too slow and some plot twist to make the romance full of tension and layered with mystery

So far, this novel has a wide use of vocabulary, which makes for engaging reading. The writing itself is enjoyable, with well-crafted sentences that showcase the author’s skill. However, by Chapter 8, the story feels rushed. Events move quickly without much time for buildup, making it hard to fully connect with the world or characters.Speaking of the world, there isn’t much in the way of world-building. The setting feels vague, with little detail to anchor the reader in a specific time or place. This makes it difficult to become fully immersed. Additionally, the plot lacks a clear sense of direction. While some novels take time to unfold, this one doesn’t seem to be building toward anything specific—at least not yet.Overall, while the writing itself is strong, the pacing and lack of depth in both world-building and plot progression make it difficult to fully engage with the story. I’ll see if things improve later on, but so far, it feels somewhat underdeveloped.Another big issue I have is the lack one quotation marks. There is no use of them at all which can make it annoying to understand who is talking, for example “ ” - for when a character is talking out loud ‘ ‘ - for when mc is reading someone’s thoughts But anyway good effort from the author, can tell they care about writing.

Totally good action! Can’t wait for more!

story is nice, synopsis and first chapter got me hooked. Keep up the good work!

Rey Castle is really an egoist, The fact that the shadow authority is this vast, I want to see how strong he will become

there's nothing I can fault with the quality of the writing, and the story has drawn me in. the characters all seem to have their own unique thought process and personalities, which sometimes can be executed poorly. 16 chaps a week certainly isn't bad, and the  post-apocalyptic world is slowly being flesh out, but as of now, I'm definitely interested. Anyone else reading this, I do recommend it because it really seems good so far.

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