OBSESSION: Scattered

for a first timer this story was greatalthough there were some questionable parts ,overall its go and i would like to see what you do with these book

I was expecting something of similar quality to "Enlightened-Empire" or "Release that witch"... But it's totally different, it like a stupid Japanese novel.My favorites ( Ordered by best on top ):- BLACK IRON’S GLORY- Tales of the Reincarnated Lord- Enlightened Empire (hiato2020?)- Release that witch- The Red Lands- Rise of the Lord (hiato)- Out of Space ( it's not good enough, at least it doesn't have a stupid system )None of them has any stupid system to ruin everything from the start :).

Wang Jin looked at a text as he began to cross the street, though it seems he would not reach the other side this time.

some delicious smell or some delightful strain of music had just

       "WELCOME TO LEGENDARY FORCES"

"No! I refuse to live! I want to die! Please, someone, kill me!" Biyu shrieked.

Before the village chief asked whom they were looking for, a village girl came up behind her.

The lion approached me step-by-step. As soon as the lion got close enough it stuck its head out and began to sniff me. As I was frozen in place the lion was walking around me doing circles and switching directions every few seconds or so.