NaruHina: Postscripts

How should I put it? In terms of writing, it’s quite excellent. The setting and themes are well thought out, and the character designs are also strong. While it might not bring every character to life, at least the Sword Pavilion Master, the Eldest Senior Sister, and the bearded guy are quite vividly portrayed. However, the logical flow of the plot is a bit harder to evaluate.In the early stages, the protagonist’s various experiences—like the protective charm saving his life or the thunder talisman blowing up the wolf demon—could have been better understood if he had just put a little more thought into it. Even if he didn’t fully grasp the situation, he could have at least had some clues, and with a bit more time, he might have figured it out. Even outsiders, upon first meeting the protagonist, could piece together the cause and effect of events within a short time. As someone who holds a cheat ability, he keeps thinking he’s some kind of “tumor superman.” But it seems his mind might be a bit off—if we categorize him as intellectually challenged, then his mindless behavior isn’t entirely incomprehensible. Additionally, the transition from the protagonist’s ignorance to understanding the truth of the events isn’t handled very well.

It's a really good story. I like the MC, he's extremely straightforward and a literal brute. According to MC, Bigger = Better and he goes all in on this ideology. Although most of the times, he acts docile and calm, but when he is forced? Boy do you not want him forced.

Absolutely loving this novel! The main character, Jung is a delightful mix of wit and heart. His dynamic with his sister Elara adds depth, while the humor keeps things light and engaging. The world-building is intriguing and I can’t wait to see how the story unfolds. Highly recommend adding it to your reading list! 🌟

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Sharae asks keeping her eye on the prey infront of her as he slowly gets further away "Honestly just want my fucking breakfast for tomorrow back" Sharae chuckles "Alright I won't make a mess" She quickly picks up the pace and gets closer to her target 'fast little bugger ain't you?' Sharae thought to her self as she gets close enough she could touch him .

Groaaaahhhh grunted Quian happily back.

"Hmph such filth dares spout feces at me... It's only fitting I crush his big head into a thousand pieces."

I make out with Akeno as I churn her pussy nice and steadily just the way she likes it, Akeno is wrapping her legs tight on my waist so I don't pull out of her pussy and Rias is doing her best to not moan out from having her pussy sensations being stimulated by my cock as she failed to do that as the both of can hear her moan out with us for the next few hours