Museum Bola

Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast  you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans.

I really love this book  Just a few chapters and I'm hooked already 🥲.Really cool 🤭Keep it up Dakutsuki

Very well written, clear characters, and most likely a seasoned writer/author who knows how to draw you in. It’s easy to see the settings and immerse yourself in this world. Something you should read if you have a chance.

"About Two--"

Everyone at the banquet had stopped eating to see Ken, who suddenly made a strange fruit appear and ate it, but he showed a disgusting face and burned the fruit shortly after, there was a bit of hatred in his action, although the fruit was strange, almost everyone in the place knows what it was, a fruit of the devil.

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Pembeli: Tapi tolong nasi dan ayamnya dipisah ya Mbak..

wait a second   those  creatures look familiar