Mors Diary: 473 Days on the Road to Failure

This is really good ngl, the backgrounds good, the story I like the concept of saving fiction, I love the characters in the cover page e.t.c

Really nice novel🔥🔥🔥 already loving it and will be waiting for more chapters

The story is a bit slow and the MC is your average apocalypse junkie like you most likely he has a decent backstory overall the key difference between most story's like this recently is there is no real "game elements" and the MC has a heart problem overall story is good but slow the chapters are also small but it's a good story Luv you author for your first story it's great

Chapter order is all wrong, you have chapters in the wrong place, and even sentences out of order, in short this MTL is all over the place, save yourselves the headache, especially when the dickhead author expects you pay for it

"My lord Light, My Lord Light." Faintly heard in Light ear.

Its the last day at college before exams. Ron and I were sitting in the open premises more of a garden type of the college, talking about studies as usual. He was sitting by my side. He suddenly got paused with his conversation and started gazing at me without blinking his eyes.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

His single bedroom apartment solely being used as his home during his time at university. Since he was living alone he had a lot of freedom than if he shared a dorm with other students.