Milf Short story collection

It’s my first time being interested in an unrated story, so I will give it my first ever review, I think it deserves it.I have been lurking on this new story for the last 2 days and I am glad I did so far. The first few chapters were slow in pace but the interactions between characters and the world building kept me around. But by chapter 4-5 it really did it for me, the tension, the pace and the few mysteries here and there made me want to see how this story will turn out.Good: Author’s world seems really original and interesting. I do like my system action stories, but it’s refreshing to have something else at times. I also like MC and his background, his actions and emotions feel right and appropriate to his age. I also like that the other characters also got a clear identity and voice. Bad: The writing at times got some weakness that made a few chapters long to read. I would recommend to get more to the point when it comes to describing actions and feelings. Webnovels isn’t for slow readers. But the last two chapters (12-13) really give me hope that author will get better and better.That’s all, wishing author and this story the best!

                                        Good.

Author I Just read the synopsis and I have to tell you you got me hooked....if only that Lilith goddess that gave MC a system is in the Harem then it'll be worth reading...

Boy: "but mom!"

At that moment a girl opened the door , carrying bags of luggage behind her and stopped at the door, looking at a giant rat made of cement standing on its hind legs, wearing shorts with a muscular upper body, what looked like a tattoo on its shoulder "Thug Life" and a bandana with sunglasses while carrying a brick on top of its shoulder.

The confusion turned to shock as I spotted my arms, they were 3 times the size as they originally were

[Throw me your sword] She shouted

I have a story on wettpad app tittled "Saiyan in the Marvel universe" if you guys are interested