Lightning Dream

hello guys i am the author . I am currently writing my board exams , new chapters will be uploaded from 30th march . Please wish me luck for the exams

is this story just going to follow in the footsteps of the first demonic dragon every step of the way or will it diverge at some point into its own story, right now it's the same thing except the MC is gender-swapped, everyone else has been race swapped and even then it feels some parts have been copied and pasted with a few changes here and there in an attempt to make the story your own! Now I would like to continue reading If the story will become its own thing and go its own way but if it is just going to follow the first demonic dragon every step of the way then I'm just going to have to drop this story.

After so much time the GOD Erosire is back!

the story got me hooked , hope it continues , even though it hasn't been updated :(

The Fallen Book of Deva's" hooks you right from the start with its rich world-building and intriguing premise. The opening scene, with the mysterious book falling from the sky and transforming the Atasha Kingdom, is captivating and immediately sets a grand tone. The history of the kingdom's rise from desolation to prosperity is well-done and piques curiosity about the book's deeper significance.The pacing, however, feels a bit uneven. The transition from the kingdom’s history to the present-day dialogue in Moonlight Inn was a little jarring for me. It might benefit from a smoother shift, perhaps with a more gradual introduction to current events. This would help maintain immersion and flow.The sparring match at Fortress Academy is intense and gripping. Darius is a great antagonist; his cruelty is palpable, and I felt genuine sympathy for Aryan. However, I’d love to see more depth to Aryan’s character. We see him suffer, but learning more about his thoughts, motivations, or backstory earlier would make it easier to connect with him as a protagonist.One suggestion: consider slowing down

"Did you do this Issei?" Kiba snaps

       <Weapon Katana>

So much to do, so much to see