If you’re uncomfortable, sit up straight.

author here for those wondering this is close to what mc currently looks likeand I know I don't have to say this but i really hope you guys love my booklove you all and thanks for the support -devildog

They got the best bowling lane and prepared to play. Harry actually wore clothes for once, wearing what seemed to be a team shirt and pants, but he refused to put on shoes. Rebecca however got light up rainbow shoes that seemed impossible to ignore, and she convinced Jasper to wear a orange version that was a lot less bright. Sophie however was too busy trying to beat another girl in a dancing game to bowl. They kept tying so eventually they just did a no rules dance battle. It got crazy fast with kids shooting laser pointers to add effect. The group watched for a bit and laughed before they started bowling. As usual, Rebecca went first, managing to hit a spare. Then Harry went, managing 9 pins thanks to a split. Next was Jasper. He breathed a bit and then rolled a strike. Then the next round began. Rebecca hit 6 pins this time and blamed that someone had used lights to mess with her. Harry scolded her but then took up her argument when he went down with two gutter balls. Once again Jasper was up and astonishingly, he hit yet another strike. It was then Harry realized he had made a mistake.

"Ok young man your wish will happen" said God

When Ayden heard this, he was burning with rage. Flames blazed in his eyes. The next moment, he put on a evil face.

"What?!" This time, the shout did not come from her mother, but her best friend, who couldn't keep quiet any longer. She pushed her way to the side of her bed, the opposite one from where her parents were standing, and gripped her arm. "Lian, you remember me, right? Your parents? You can't have amnesia!"

I love these types of stories and this one is not disappointing. I can tell as I read through the chapters that the characters are engaging. The world building is immense. Highly recommend giving this one a read

Great original story, good characters, but wish there was more background on characters as the story starts with a 15-year timeskip, and we still don't know much about some people. Story feels really fast paced, as MC can already fight people ranked 8th on the ranking system (where there are currently only 10 known ranks) before even chapter 100. Basically no filler chapters, all relevant to the story. If you've read enough originals you can easily ignore the grammar errors as you're brain just corrects them. The only thing that throws me off is how some action can be happening in a chapter then the next one starts with "two days later" or something completely different from last chapter. I would love if the chapters transactions were a bit smoother, but apart from that, great original ~

It’s a good story but I can’t help but want the author to concentrate on farming more. Plus why does song hi have to keep reminding the mc about the farm book . It makes the MC seriously look dumb. Plus there are too many systems it makes the protagonist lose it’s appealing point. Protagonists are suppose to be special right. It a nice story line but I don’t really like how the characters are.