I Will Eventually Return to the Great Sect

It’s a great book so far I would rate it higher besides some of my opinions. The words he and her get switched up a lot and it progresses a bit fast and a few other small things but overall it’s good the mc isn’t op right off the bat and seems to learn from their mistakes so give it a read

This story’s got potential, like a tortoise taking its sweet time, which I love lol😂 But there’s too much filler, like stuffing a sandwich with air.😭🙏Still, the plot’s got me hooked, so keep it up! Just trim the filler, and we are good to go!Author be like:

I love this novel so much, I’ve been dying laughing since I’ve been reading this. Author, you’ve done an amazing job so far. All I ask is that you paste the story well and please please please finish.

ML forces/imposes himself onto FML. When they’re married, he breaks his promise of never hurting her and only being good to her, then he treats another woman well. When both women were in danger during an avalanche on a snow mountain, he saves the other. Afterwards, he forces FML to forgive him by threatening his own life. His pitiful state is his fault and his behavior is cheap. Disgusting. Thankful I didn’t pay money to get to those parts. Next!

Speed down the pace of your story a bit,  and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!

Ako nga pala si Marvie Almadin. Pumapasok sa puso't isip niya. De joke lang :D

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