I Have A Cheat System In The Apocalypse

I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something?

Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this.

First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars)

Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars)

Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars)

World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars)

Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.

sorry bro I can't even start reading the book because of the synopsis It's as if it is a Chinese young master novel.I will not comment anything on the novel as I have not read it,but I suggest changing the synopsis

Overall a good story.

Writing Quality (5/5): Ignoring the very small, almost non-existent errors, the writing didn't hinder me from diving into the story.

Stability of updates (5/5): it's updated frequently so I have no regrets in reading till the latest chapter.

Story Development (4/5): I say, there are some parts that could have come out better (not mentioning, don't want to spoil) but yes, the development felt a tad bit forced here and there.

Character design (4/5): I don't mostly like op chars or chars with such mentality, but it was good nonetheless. Plus, I loved the side chars developed however, you could add more emotions and make them chat jovially perhaps.

World background (4/5): not bland, but not perfect. Though, I shouldn't question you considering that it didn't hinder the reading, but when it came to judging, I did feel that it was lacking a bit.

Overall (4.4/5): Recommending to all who like less-descriptive story and more of a fun read.

Writing Quality: Author vividly describes the scenes that had taken part in the novel that will allow the readers to fully immerse within the world of the novel. Definitely excellent writing quality!

Story Development: Author used the system cliche very well to make it intriguing to read that wouldn't bore out the readers. Also, NO HAREM!!!

Character Design: Three words- Not Beta MC. Do I have to elaborate? I think not. We readers already know the importance of the mc not being beta.

Updating Stability: Author updates daily. What more can you ask for?

World Background: A bit of an info dump at the start but the author was aware of it so he didn't made it too much of an info dump and prevented it from boring the readers. kudos to the author!

Overall: A must read! The fact that the MC isn't Beta is already one of the best thing about this novel. And... NO HAREM!!! Hurray!!!

So I do like it, but honestly I just don't understand what is happening, maybe I didn't pay attention but I'm around chapter 35 and I've completely lost track of what's happening

Good.
Very good.
Real good.
Profoundly good.
Paranormally good.
Astoundingly good.
Breathtakingly good.
Shockingly good.
Overwhelming good.
Staggeringly good.
Astonishingly good.
Confoundingly good.
Stupefyingly good.
It's just good.
Why did you read all of this?
What's wrong with you?
Why are you wasting your life on my nonsense?






Hi

Excellent book. I love the story and the way the story is progressing. I read only few chapters now but will read more. This book is great and I recommend you to read it. Truthfully, I don't like giving spoilers it would be better if you read it!! I added it to my library and will read more. Great work, Author.
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Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work.
Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements!
What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology?
Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason.
The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants).
They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem.
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