Would you like to be the heir of a power that dates back to the beginning of the world?
Mel was a skinny boy living in a mountain village. Although his abilities were limited, he was happy and spent his days experiencing peace in the forest until that day came.
His relationship with the older man who lived in the ruined house outside the village would make him heir to the world\'s greatest secret.
He was trying to make his way across the river of life in a raft that not belonged to him. Changing with each stop he was dragged into, Mel first knew himself, and the powers he had inherited, and then the order of humans.
It would either rise despite the whole world or be a forgotten detail in the dusty pages of history.
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Popular Reviews
My native language is not English and my translator may have minor mistakes. If you indicate it in your comments, it will be improved in the translation of the second volume.
The reason I gave myself full marks is because I believe I wrote the best I can now.
Welcome to Heir of the Dragon, the first of many light novels you'll read from me.
STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable.
Pros:
*There are clear objectives
*well-defined setting
*Imaginative details.
Cons:
*Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes.
WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play.
WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct.
UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars).
CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.
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