Heir of the Dragon

this was so hard to read for some reason and the way you describe things is appalling. could not get past the free chapt sadly not worth it for me.

I hope you don't get mad at me doing the first review and giving full points :)
My native language is not English and my translator may have minor mistakes. If you indicate it in your comments, it will be improved in the translation of the second volume.

The reason I gave myself full marks is because I believe I wrote the best I can now.

Welcome to Heir of the Dragon, the first of many light novels you'll read from me.

I can't get enough of this story. I think this might win for my favorite story of the year, unless it ties with one other story, as the rest so far are not as much fun, fulfilling or fascinating as this one is. It feels fresher for the way it's put together. I'm moved through wide range of feelings. I would love to see drawings from this story because the ones that come to mind are breathtaking from what I've read so far. My only wish is that I could read this in its original language; something is always lost in translation. I look forward to reading this. I wish you, Sanseiu, much success in this story.

[The First Volume] Just short of 5 stars.

STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable.
Pros:
*There are clear objectives
*well-defined setting
*Imaginative details.
Cons:
*Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes.

WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play.

WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct.

UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars).

CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.

I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer and a friend, You will be noticing that he will be writing complete and quality stories all the time, Good Luck !!

Yazarın önceki kitaplarını da okuduğum için bu kitabında diğer kitaplar kadar iyi olduğunu görüyorum ve devamını heyecanla bekliyorum umarım en kısa zamanda gelir bölümler

I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer, so I hope u can get what you want. Also I expect to see a different plot line that’ll be different than normal ones. Do your best and show yourself!

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