Finish Line ✓

At first, I was kinda sad that it was being rewritten, however, it’s genuinely better than the original while staying true to its OG plot line. Ofcourse there some changes, but 10/10. 💕💕💕

Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top

This review is for people like me, the ones who read the low rated reviews first. What I am about to write is my personal opinion, though I will try to write from an unbiased perspective.Ahem, Ahem World Development (4/5)—> The setting is primarily of a Beast Taming world, mixing in 'Talents' and obviously magic. Now I know some might resent Beast Taming genre, like why should protagonist be reliant on some beasts for his strength and all. I did to, before I read this that is. While, Beasts do play a big part, I believe the 'Talent' of protagonist kinda makes up for it, especially after it..Ahh nah it would be a big spoiler, just know that his 'Talent' becomes more busted. So while protagonist would indeed to a large extent be dependent on his Beasts, he wouldn't be completely helpless without them, not to forget there is magic and his kind of system too— like those Gamer System type, gaining experience from training and killing and all. Then, for the bigger world—Empires, world structure and all— We are in kinda the starting phase now, so it isn't thoroughly explained yet, but you can trust the writer for it, he will pull through and from what little I gathered till now it seems promising enough. As for info dumps? Well he tries to avoid it but there are times when they are necessary. So grit through it.Power System (4/5)— World's power system is pretty much simplified, like you don't continuously need to go back to the auxiliary chap to refresh the power system (gods that's annoying and breaks the flow). Quite early for any solid rating but till now it seems simple and promising enough and I hope this will be continued. Now with considering the power system of his other novels, I gave this rating. Now for his own System? Well like I said before its kinda similar to the Gamer System, though minus the quest part (maybe in future?). Anyways, guy works for his strength and it isn't gifted to him on a silver platter, so good for those that enjoy weak-to-strong, but that doesn't mean he is completely weak either. He is overpowered for his level and improves quickly— in a nutshell it stands between both the genre, so it won't leave either side completely dissatisfied.Writing Quality (4/5)— It's quite good, like good good. I have read tons of book, it's my favorite hobby and a great pastime, check my profile if you want. So, while I wouldn't say the quality is the best I have read, but surely it is one of the best. The conversations are smooth, grammar is good, nothing feels 'forced' and then there is the golden point that author knows how to properly convey things— you wouldn't need to read twice or thrice to get a good picture, especially in the fighting scenes—Also, characters have their own personality and don't act out of it, pretty neat. Main Character (5/5)— Kael (Mc) is or rather was an uni student. An orphan (no  need to worry about him wanting to go back), someone that is quite cunning and perspective. While it is the usual Hero thing, don't expect him to be the bastion of morality, though he isn't a villain either. Basically put, a man kinda forced to work for the world he was summoned to, well like he knows he won't receive the royal treatment or opportunity to grow if he doesn't. He is basically milking the kingdom, but would also protect the world since..he lives there now. He has a father side too, to his Beasts that is, which I will talk about a bit later. Overall, an intelligent man that isn't edgy and would help people, though he won't throw his life or his bonds for it. There are decisions he takes that leaves readers sometimes irritated, which I would talk about later, but keep in mind that this is his 'reality', he takes decisions logically while keeping the bigger picture in mind since there is no redo or chapters for him.I gave this rating because he is honestly acting the ideal way—not wanting to expose all his secrets for some fame or to please people he doesn't even know, not trusting that everyone wants his better, not completely trusting the kingdom either..Ahh he is also a cultured man, aware of his monstrous talent, one point for this alone!Ahem, now I would talk about these 'problems', the ones people drop the book for—it's a bit of spoiler, you have been warned. ....Firstly, Mc's first bond—Igni, was evolved into a dragon by him. Mc hid him, opting to not show little Igni to the kingdom and all his teachers. I saw many bashing author for this, I wouldn't lie even I was a bit irritated about it, hiding strength Mc's were always a bit irritating to read, but when I thought of the bigger picture, it made sense. Dragons are considered overpowered mythical beings here, they are said to be very protective of their kin, so now if Mc was to reveal he had one, it would raise questions and put him into needless danger — "How do you have a dragon, when the egg we gave was of a wyvern?"— this in turn would reveal his 'Talent' which he is also hiding.Mind you, this world's inhabitants are desperate due to the calamity, wouldn't have summoned him if they weren't, this could make him their 'weapon' taking away his freedom and chaining him down and making him a dragon-making machine. Not to mention the greed of people...and it's not like he completely hides his talent, it isn't 'I am known as one of the weakest but can easily kick your ass, though you don't know that' type, people all around him acknowledge his strength and monstrous talent, so it isn't much of a let down.Don't let this get to you, if those future visions Mc had, ones where he was called the 'Dragon Lord' were anything to go by, then he wouldn't hide them for long anyway.. also the recent chapters had proven that not everyone in kingdom is appreciative of his presence, basically some are after his life, so it really was a smart choice.Now another 'sub-problem' of his bond. Many were bashing Author for how quickly he got attached to it, that too to a such high level, basically the father side I spoke of earlier. From what I gather, he although didn't show it, was scared—being summoned to another world and now being forced to fight in a war that wasn't his— not everyone adapts overnight, he is doing a great job in adapting so far, anyway his Igni is his light. First being in this unknown world, that he doesn't have to pretend infront of or be wary of, not to mention his cuteness! Ahem, so in this stressful situation he latched on to his Igni to move forward. Basically Igni is his little light, only one he cares about in this new world and can be his true self infront of...Now the next one I am about to mention isn't exactly a problem as of yet, well Author just made his final decision regarding it literally two hours ago, so as a form of precaution, I will count it as a 'problem'.. too lazy to write for it again if required in future.Romance, the potential second 'problem'— The story has been decided to be a No-Harem one, which due to the beautiful ladies mentioned around protagonist would be a let down for many. But I don't care much honestly, I read both No-Harem and Harem, though some people stick to one part..Anyway what I want to say is, I believe Author would do the romance justice. His other book SHGS despite having nearly twenty Fls is quite good, not to mention his 'Magic's Return' which is a No-Harem. I absolutely loved that 'Magic's Return' book, and since it is focusing solely on one Fl, the amount of cute moments, romantic interactions and love development were fire. Now that this book would be a No-Harem, you can expect tons of cute romantic interactions, detailed and good love development—the one that shows how they became lovers and gained feelings for the other and all.And if the female lead is Who-I-Think-It-Is, then no one would be disappointed (she is called the most beautiful women of the world), I have noticed that if the story is a No-Harem but has a ridiculously beautiful Fl then even Harem readers like that..so your choice anyway. Though keep in mind, that it isn't sure that she is the actual Fl, anyway I know Author enough to know that the Fl would be a beauty. This is what I think, and I have tried to write everything from an unbiased perspective—as much as I could, in the end the choice is yours.Ooiii Sloth, I deserve a pin alright— more than 8,339 words and lots of thinking. You better gimme my deserved pin!

Bro, this book is freaking awesome!!!! I can't get enough of it.never seen a book this good for a beginner...More chapters... please !!

This story is going great and I find it fun and intresting to read, personally I feel the story is a bit rushed, if you csn please kind of elaborate things and take it a bit slow, so that we can really immerse into the story rather then just feel like reading a rushed story, apart from the pace everything is really awesome keep going, hope you continue uploading.

I think the way it’s written is quite promising. I’m still not entirely sure whether the focus will be more on Adélard or Leon, but I can tell it’s building up the atmosphere well. I’m excited to see more football action, though. Right now, the action sequences are taking a larger role than the football moments, so I’m looking forward to seeing that shift as the story progresses.

Ahem, don't mind me while I artificially inflate the rating                                                                 ~               

One if not the best fanfic of TODAG just refreshing not reading about the bull**** of not changing the future... ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>;)