Fated (Wangxian)

The chapter 2 twist made me actually lol irl, may your book be successful just off of that bro

I was barely keeping up with novels on this platform for the past few months. Only logged in every once in a while to check out the new novels before dipping again. This is one of the novels I found at such a time.Found this when it was first released and added it to my library and started reading it in earnest now that I am more or less back to reading on this platform. And it was a pleasant experience by no means.There are a lotta flaws in this novel that came to my notice, but mainly, it is boring. 50 chapters in, and the novel is completely chaotic. Too many things have happened at once, and too many characters have been introduced with barely any progression with the previously introduced. So far(50 chaps in), of the around a dozen named characters introduced, the only ones with any development is the MC and Evangeline. While I understand it may be hard to write actual development in merely a 50 chaps, it was not necessary to introduce so many chars either. The plot point with Amara for once, could have been slowly introduced instead of dumping it all at once with barely a few chaps in the novel(this is just an example, I am just saying the author could have handled things better). In the process of adding more elements, the author seems to have forgotten other elements. Like Celina, who barely gets mentioned every now and then despite the clear signs of her importance in the earlier chaps. While the author's ambitions are clear, his delivery clearly misses the point. The story is clearly too rushed.And most important of all, the power system. The MC describes a C-rank skill that makes some1 nigh-immortal. To put things into perspective, the holder of this skill wont die even if their head is cut off. The MC in his past life had to destroy every part of their body so they don't regenerate. All this, for a mere C-rank skill. And later on, the MC gets a free skill from the principal as a 'compensation' of sorts, for events that barely made sense(either because I was too sleep deprived while reading this particular part of because it wasn't explained well, not completely sure about that.) and this skill while incredibly strong(it can block any attack once) but has a very long cooldown of 3 months. While this may be a useful skill, again, no where close to the regeneration skill, it is far too underwhelming because of the needlessly long cooldown time. I mean, what use is a skill that you can barely use 4 times a year?All this is without even mentioning how the MC seems to have skills rained down on him, besides the SSS-rank(evolvable) skill he received initially. To my count, he has received around 7 or 8 skills already, and there is already ways set in stone for him to get even more.This brings me to my next point, the MC uses his skills to win every fight. This makes the fight bland and un-engaging. There is no fun in fights when the MC can easily kill them all with the single use of a skill(and it does not help that barely any mana is necessary to use skills).Despite all the negatives I have pointed out, I will prolly continue to read this since all the points I have addressed can be corrected with time. Hopefully, my fastpasses won't be wasted.

The teacher responded, "I know you are Zhou Lei! I am saying that this man's name is Zhou Lei as well."

Mercy brought a book that will guide me, and she has been reading it on how to overcome this situation.

Conrad looked at me and nodded.

the city lord trow something like a toke and rey catch it

Aldeana - sorry girl, you are a relative of Ur-san-

"Good morning Sehun! Remember to eat breakfast before you go to work. Tell Cerberus, I love him soooo much."