Fated Hearts: Rejected by the Moon

i guess i should review my story to push it out a bit. im just going to say some random stuff like i am now to get 140 words in and make it a valid review. anyway if you're reading this, the story is about the main character disobeying the world he lives in and going berserk many times over, leading him to gain the king's attention and become wanted. later on it becomes more apocalyptic, well how i've planned it so far anyway. you'll just have to read to find out. Woah, this is way more than 140 words, i'll post it now

thanks for the chapters, happy to read them

ofc W story I'm from his discord server so i have read till ch 20 so ik. it's gonna get complex after ch 11

I'll be utterly honest, I was like, a little bored when I started... actually, I thought I was not good.but going further, stuffs began to happen. and I find myself eager for more.I particularly like Pato.there's still room for improvements, but believe it's going to get better as we journey.

It's definitely something that I recommend. The premise is interesting, and the writing quality is high with little to no grammatical errors. It has clarity and is easy to understand on most occasions. At the same time, the protagonist has certainly grown on me as I read more chapters

<p>Waiting for Alexa, the attendant came with her ringing cell phone in hand. "Miss, your phone was buzzing. I thought you might want to answer it if it's urgent."</p>

Thanks for the chapter

I chuckled against his lips. "As if it would matter in this gown."