Fate’s Broken Circuit

Bro, the first chapter of your story has emotional depth, and it's hard to judge the entire book based on just that. But I can tell you, you can add a mystery tag if you want. I feel like you should start with Renzo in an emotional way and make it suspenseful if you don't mind.

wow, this author really can't think of any other name apart from Ayush, and I've seen like three other of his stories with the same synopsis and I'm like🤷🏿u200d♀️, um okay, seriously dude, think of something new to do instead of writing the same thing

i absolutely love the development so far, the interaction between MC and the other characters is both funny and serious when needed to be, the world building is well done so far, ans the magic system seems to be very open ended which I love, good work so far

If the stakes Get even higher i will Eat it up even more, I want tO see where it goes from here. The world gets easier to imagine with each passage, And the writing is very good.

thank you for the daily updates, its become part of my routine to read 3 chapters of this webnovel. great mc focus and relentless in training, love the story so far

Hey, Author here. I'll be bias and give my book five star. Though I know it worth it. Let dive straight to what to expect from this book. A wise and overpower Mc that will not think with his little brother. Harem. Yes. System. Yes. Mystery. Yes. Revenge. Yes.Worldbuilding with modern invention introduce by the Mc. This is a story where the MC is not going to level up alone, but the whole world will grow stronger with him. A fight not only against the Mc, but the world itself. A story where a mortal planet ascend to the upper realm and dominate other realms with the Mc. With Modern invention and Ancient Techniques; the Mc and the Lotus World dominate the multi universe. Guess, this is all I can say. If you want to find out how everything unravel. Read to find out. Cheers.

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