ENEMY KILLED IN ACTION

I loved the world you created. So many twists and turns.  Keep up the amazing work!

No way she is left with no eggs. Ughhh I'd cryy

Love this book

I loved the book but the to be updated notes that cost coins, and the last two real chapter mix ups, are a problem.

it is a his problem but also not really at the same time cause its not uncommon for people who dont speak a language to have a hard time with it also did you know that Chinese names and names from the East in general are way different to the west so in the west we are not use to saying those names all the time 24/7 in the end i guess im saying cut a lad some slack

The writing's really repetitive.  The main guy and his guild of like 10 people piss off a massive organization and have to fight whole towns worth of people.  Then a couple chapters later the same thing happens.  Then a couple chapters later the same thing happens.  Then a couple chapters later the same thing happens.  It's got the same problems as "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" or "Peerless Martial God".  Everyone is preposterously unreasonable and starts a blood feud for the slightest reason.  They're all incredibly famous and no one has ever heard of them.  The MC has his name and his legendary deeds announced to the entire server multiple times, and the heads of massive organizations have no idea who he is.The guy the most honest and loyal person to his wife, and she's kind of awful.  Like he goes out to get some fast food, so she accuses him of cheating on her, and forces him to apologize.  He turned away from his incredibly wealthy and powerful family to be with his wife, and she treats him like shit.  Got to chapter 1080 before I just gave up.