Ember Throne: Rise of the Forgotten Prince

so damn good i just read a few chapters and got hooked up on it please continue the story and don't drop it and look am your first fan no one is gonna challenge my position

dear author , the story is great but the thing is some plot holes are killing it a bit, I mean things are happening without proper explanation first , and even in the later part the explanation is kind of vague so I hope you improve on that and actually the story is kind of great compared to other villain oriented novels nowadays , Keep up the good work 👍🤘

Honestly , I know that so far not much has happened in terms of world building or greater plot , but I want to make sure that the current setting is fully fleshed out and try not to rush anything.

As soon as we sit down, the teacher ask us about the homework. Then we answered in instantly. "Not yet Mrs ...!"

Flint started slowly inching closer and closer to the door while keeping up a smile to keep Milo from suspecting anything. He could see that Milo was close to snapping at him and so he tried to keep his path of escape close to himself.

Shortly after he was born, his mother had somehow managed to implant a Snowsprite chrysalis in his forehead.  Subsequent research has shown that the process is fairly simple.  However vigilant repression by the Star Guild kept this information out of the public eye.  Consequently, when Aedon was but seven years old, the results of this act manifested itself.  Aedon began to exhibit wonder-working abilities.  It was in the exercise of these newfound talents that his path crossed that of a Master Smith of the Star Guild.  His use of the energy field attracted the attention of the Smith, who in keeping with guild policy banished the child from the planet.  This act occurred almost without thought.  No child should have been invested with the star gem, but the fact that the bearer was a child did not deter him, they were all children.  Although his oath prevented him from destroying the child outright, it did not prevent him from addressing the source of the leak.  Since the code required that no Gem-bearer be destroyed in other than direct combat by another wearer of the gem.

"That was a bust, but we got about thirty minutes of sleep. Every second counts to get her schedule back on track. Cell #69, I never thought that I would ask this off you, but keep her awake with fan fiction. Which ever one will keep her awake most." Cell #400 stated to Cell #69.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play