Dragon Pirate's Slice Of Life

Very good introduction of characters, a nice story so far keep up the work. I see the potential bro, just keep on working dawg I'm a day one fr.

Well your novel only has 20 chapters so can't reall judge how it  will turn out, but I'm liking it as of now, I particularly liked that grim reaper and her quirky character ,in the end I will only say keep going.

Sempurna untuk cerita santai dan seru!Cerita ini seru untuk orang yang suka cerita santai dan selipan comedy. Yang sang mc melihat kelakuan keturan Li di riwayat hidup mereka apa aja yang di lakukan sepanjang hidup mereka.

I think it's great novel just missing a better description of the characters from mc original worlds information I'm just perfectionist 😋

well author does our mc gets a revenge arc

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

I look at my Katana and it is bent a bit. Dammit! I am going to need a new close range weapon really soon! I dodge back quickly and in front of me everything is cut again including the bastard Orc who clubbed me and bent my Katana. It's two halves fall to either side. "Karma." I do a quick spin and cut the Orc who snuck up behind me from shoulder to hip. It hurt my wrist a bit. Dammit! This Katana has gone bad and I don't know how to fix it! I zip in between trees and reload my magazine. 20 rounds left. In slow motion I see the Elite Orc standing right next to me swinging its Greatsword at me with massive fOrce. I jump up and do a flying cartwheel with no hands on the floor. I aim my .45 Pistol at the Elite Orc and fire two rounds at its face. The Elite Orc turns its head slightly sideways causing my rounds to graze off its helmet and my eyes go wide. One lands on a tree and the other hits an Orc in the chest causing it to take a step back but ultimately be fine. What the hell is with their vitality and this things reaction speed?! I land one foot on the floor and the Greatsword is already swinging back at me. Holy smokes! I have no choice but to block this time. With only a foot on the ground it connects with my Katana I am holding it with on hand on the grip and the other is held with the gun to create a more stable hold, not that it mattered in this situation. The colossal fOrce breaks the Katana in half and leaves a deep cut on my chest. I can basically see some bone. I am catapulted through two thick trees breaking them and some of my ribs. I then bounce off 6 more trees like a ragdoll before I collide with the ground causing it to depress a little. I struggle to stand up and I look down at my chest where I can see bone. "Fudge! It hurts! Direwolf leather was useless this time!" I observe my enemies and I spy them laughing and feeling victorious. "Roar! Snort!" I can see a smug look on the Elite Orcs face.

Vanessa:abat bastos ka ha>< sinasabi ko na nga ba ei ikaw yung kupal na tumawag!saan mo nakuha no.ko ha!