Death's Fated Love

I've read up to chapter 70 so far. I liked the fan fiction in many ways. But there are also bad sides, I absolutely did not like time travel, that is, not time travel itself, but how it is served here. I hope it gets better. (Translator)

the names are changed and posted as a webnovel original I guess

"what are you doing, let me go" patients whispered as she tried to push the man off her but it didn't work. "she's our daughter sir.... she has nothing to do with this" her father said as he looked at the mysterious man sitting on there couch.

Only shooting stars

Power, this is the first time I understood what power meant. Those eyes looking down on me as I stumbled back to the floor, those cold and hard eyes making me cower even as I tried my best to stand my ground, it was all too much.

"Are you certain about this?" Jushiro asked.

She was shocked in horror as she couldn't found any logical reason as to what this phenomena that happens in front of her means, so she tried getting up and run away from this strange circle but just as fast as the circle appears, it also just suddenly vanished along with Elena and the pitiful bird in her hand.

I don't normally read romance novels but this might might worth a try  I've read a few chapters and it feels a bit rushed in places while a bit slow in some other places. It would be better to fix that.