death by angels: saviors or destroyers

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

I want to go with you, Mai said.

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And now I'm picking up the pieces.

Rayhan menghentikan ciumannya dan mengusap pipi Kinan yang memerah,"Gimana? Kamu udah selesai milih gaun untuk pernikahan kita sayang?"tanya Rayhan yang begitu lembut.

"you will be helping me to deliver gifts to her everyday till she become mine "he said and motioned to a waiter who came forward to our table with some things which I presumed to be food in a black nylon with the name "prestigious cafeteria boldly written on it and he motioned to her to hand them over to me which she did and she left.

Shang'a:kk

Honestly this book sounds great, the idea Behind it is alSo great, But i have to dRop it after a few pages bc the wrIting wuality is....well the easieSt way to descrive it is like this: it seems as though this is the rough draft of the book, paragraphs have missing spaces (not too big of a deal), grammAr is Decent, however i have to ask, does the auThor have an issue with the word “the?” Bc every single sentence or paragraph is misSing the word “the” where it is Beeded. ex: AuThor of the book Made a great book vs the author of the book made a great book. there are nore like this and its everywhere not in some random Places of the book. it makes it really hard to read the book properly and i had to coBstabtly Go back and reread the sEnstences wHile adding the word “the” Into them. im not going to Get rid of the book as i hope the author goes back and Fixed rhese issues, however i wont read it until its fixed.