Dance of the Damned

The words were kind of poetic. Each phrase represented the time and situation the characters were in and the use of the language was kind and mellow to the mind. It was very interesting, I look forward to more chapters in the future.

Magnificent cover page!
The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive. You are doing great!
Another story to follow... I wish I could have more power stones ;)

First, I must say, the first paragraph of your synopsis got me.

An awesome book with an amazing plot. I love it

Though i write this novel when there is only three chapter and there is a long way to go. i must says that i found the concept of the story to be interesting and the use of language here is immersive and pretty.

      But i do find some problem in certain scene where there are multiple unnamed Character in the scene and it is hard to keep track of who is doing what. aside from that everything is great.

    I'm going to put this in my library and I'm looking forward to see new chapter as I'm now curious about what's going to happen next.

Great story and nice character build. The background description is also amazing and interesting. This story has great potential. Keep it up, author!

To the readers who love lots of action plots, thriller , drama, white haired MC's and gore content with levels of plot twists. This book is absolutely recommended for you.

Coming to review, author did a great job in describing the place where the boy stayed and his nurturing environment. In a small span of time many things happened. From getting heart-broken for our poor and lovely MC's shortcomings to enjoying the thrilling journey with him.

The world background is top tier. You can feel and visualise the world and it's dynamics. The power struggle is real and not an easy match. The unknown path unfolds. I'm not gonna spoil more :)

I loved the plot. The MC's character is well written as well as all the characters in the initial chapters. Can't wait how the story unfolds more.

To the author, I would like to suggest if a new character is introduced and is going to have a role to play in the main trope then some elaboration of features would help the readers retain them in their mind more. It's all about how we feel when we are introduced to him/her for the first time. Other than that the story is

Winter_Iris.
Your writing always captivate me.
Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.
You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel.
Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.
You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.

Your skills amaze me.