Crumbling Cakes

when i read the mc is indian, I'm hoping to find some Bollywood type action, but this, this even better.

Hello! A review for this awesome novel!Summary: A person transmigrates into an eroge game as an extra(Classmate C). This is an eroge in which there are several yanderes who love the cliche protagonist of the eroge (name - Hans)(indecisive, dense, no confidence etc.). Whenever something major happens in the loop/try, the eroge restarts from the starting point. Classmate C has experienced several thousands? of loops and tries. He had done many efforts in changing the original story but was unsuccessful. However, in the current loop, things have been much different...If you want to know more, then read the story!Let's get to reviewing! [Note: All things written below are because of my personal tastes. Some might not like it.]----------Writing Quality - Writing Quality has been really good if you compare it with the level in web novels. Proper punctuation! Ample Vocabulary! Good Grammar! I might have missed some grammar mistakes as I was too engrossed in the story. (5/5)Story Development - Story Development is phenomenal. It is not predictable and has some twists and turns. It keeps the readers on the edge and makes them wait for the next chapter. Most of the time I visit the site or app just to check if this novel is updated or not. (5/5)Character Design - I love the character design for the heroines. They are not one or two dimensional. They have their own feelings and thoughts. When you read their thoughts, you can know that this is synonymous with their characters. I also like the personality of Classmate C. Though, I didn't like him because of his wimpy nature and to push the heroines toward Han(the main character of eroge). But after reading his previous experiences, it is understandable. In the latest chapters, he is beginning to change as well. (5/5)Updating Stability - Yes, the updating stability for this novel is not the Webnovel usual of 1 chapter per day but I will prefer quality over quantity. Taking 2-5 days for a chapter is fine. I will prefer an interesting and quality chapter twice or thrice a week instead of a messy chapter daily. (5/5)World Background - This is the thing which currently lacks in the novel. The only thing we know about the world background is that it is a school in which the main cast studies. I will hope for this issue to be sorted out and we can know about the world background smoothly instead of as an info dump. Currently 24 chapters. (2/5)---------You might be wondering why my rating shows (5/5) instead of less due to the world background's rating - (2/5).That's because this is currently my favourite novel out of all the novels I am following. I want this novel to have my whole support. An issue that annoys me - It will be helpful if you put the name of the person whose POV is being shown. Like - [Kurokawa's POV]. It's not a big deal but I need to read 2-3 paragraphs to know whose perspective I am reading from.Also, the author keeps asking to join his discord server, so I guess, join it?Anyways, keep it up, author! I hope you don't drop it or else..................Wait a minute, just let me get a whetstone.....Phew, here it is! Let me get something else too...Ahh, here is a good old knife...*Scratch**Scratch*What? Haven't you ever seen a person  sharpen a knife, huh? .......What do you mean that I am threatening the author? It's just a normal day-to-day activity. I want to use it for cooking!Ah, people these days, jumping to conclusions...

"Yes, shit ...." We answer in unison.

Loving you as always,

She was so angry upon seeing the memories so she cpuld only kick the study room's door but let out an 'ouch' as her feet came in contact with the hard wood.

Release a double chap on Sundays 😁

A guy dressed in a sweat suit jumped up "I would like to ask the first question.

the year of 2016 i learn about the girl who i will love alot later on. who i will call as my princess also will love her with everything. i met her through a friend and i started talking to her online. we learn alot about each other also cared alot about each other. i was the type of person who have really hard time getting a girl to love me. so they just be comes my friend. so one day i was asking her that i want to date someone then she told me to talk to a friend of her but i didn't and at the end i was like why dont you be my girlfriend and she said that she will think about it and she later we started dating. our relationship was really different then a regular relationship. we never hugged never kissed and i never asked her i told myself that of she lets i will unless i wont lay a finger on her. we went through the year like that and ended breaking up because her mom found out about us it was the time of spring that where our dating ended.