Becoming a Crime Lord

  • Genre： Urban
  • Author： BrizZl
  • Translator：
  • Status： Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
Losing his parents unexpectedly, Arslan discovers a mysterious floating screen that displays his stats and latent abilities. Initially bewildered, he can't help but feel a surge of excitement over this newfound power. However, his life takes a drastic turn when unscrupulous loan sharks come seeking payment for his late parents' debts. As time presses, Arslan is plunged into a treacherous criminal underworld, surrounded by dubious characters. To survive and navigate this perilous landscape, he begins to embrace his darker instincts, transforming his dire circumstances into an opportunity to rise and reclaim control, all while becoming a force to be reckoned with in the criminal sphere.

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  1. CastlePandaP6k
    CastlePandaP6k rated it
    The story is mid/boring. Maybe it gets better as it goes on but the first 50 chapters aren’t anything special. There’s some cliches. Read an hour of it to see if you like it maybe it’s just me
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  1. Dyalet
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    The story is rich in depth and creativity, blending epic worldbuilding with transformative character arcs. The progression through 'beyond the limit' and the intricate tiers of existence make the narrative captivating. The philosophical challenges faced by the characters add emotional weight, making them relatable and compelling. While the prose is vivid and descriptive, at times it feels overly verbose, which slightly affects pacing. Dialogue is strong but could benefit from more conciseness to maintain tension. Overall, this is a fantastically imaginative story with vast potential, deserving of high praise.
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