Bakers Dozen

good discovery, I'm really looking forward to it, please author don't drop it or turn it into rubbish please !!!! Otherwise for the others, go for it !!!

Hello everyone, I really hope you enjoy reading Author of Life. This is a really fun slice-of-life story about a boy named Thomas and his experiences as a literal god. This story is incredibly fun to write so I hope you enjoy it and can provide feedback. Thank you.

The Fallen Book of Deva's" hooks you right from the start with its rich world-building and intriguing premise. The opening scene, with the mysterious book falling from the sky and transforming the Atasha Kingdom, is captivating and immediately sets a grand tone. The history of the kingdom's rise from desolation to prosperity is well-done and piques curiosity about the book's deeper significance.The pacing, however, feels a bit uneven. The transition from the kingdom’s history to the present-day dialogue in Moonlight Inn was a little jarring for me. It might benefit from a smoother shift, perhaps with a more gradual introduction to current events. This would help maintain immersion and flow.The sparring match at Fortress Academy is intense and gripping. Darius is a great antagonist; his cruelty is palpable, and I felt genuine sympathy for Aryan. However, I’d love to see more depth to Aryan’s character. We see him suffer, but learning more about his thoughts, motivations, or backstory earlier would make it easier to connect with him as a protagonist.One suggestion: consider slowing down

finally found something worthwhile to read it has a lot of potential and I hope author will complete the novel

"Di mana saja kau? Aku khawatir setengah mati."

"I'm proud of you, Delomo,"my mom says to me a couple days ago, after I return from the church where Halim and I went for marriage counseling. "Thank you for doing this for your family."

Lord Brandom al parecer el joven amo a despertado vamos rápido, porque el viejo que esta al borde de morir viene corriendo hacia mi, parece que la parca a venido a llevarme no me estará confundiendo, Julius hijo mio por fin despiertas dime como te sientes ¿tienes alguna incomodidad? ¿te duele algún lugar?, que es esto por que el gordo me habla como si fuera su pequeña mascota y por que todos parecen conocerme de toda la vida.

"You like me?" he chuckled a little.