Avatar Awakening

So I’m going to be honest I’m probably not qualified to judge the writing. Or the story’s quality for that matter. I’m a student and my first language isn’t English. What I can say is that this is the best story i’ve seen on this site, and If you click on my profile you’ll see that I’ve been searching. I like the concept for the story, and the world building is better than probably any other book I’ve read here. Though i’m not confident about that quite yet. If you’re bored of reading wish fulfillment, you could give this a try. It has a lot if simultarities, but it mixes in some existential dread. And the world building leaves a lot of room to speculate, making it appear more realistic. I’m not entirely happy about the main character. He doesn’t quite act his age. Or something feels a bit off. Though thinking now I can’t quite figure out what it is. Anyways this is the first review I’ve written, and it’s because I truly think a lot of people on this site would enjoy the book. I haven’t read far yet (chapter 14), but it seems really promising.

First of all, I LOVE A NOVEL WITH AN INTRICATE WORLD BUILDING?! There's only a few chapters but GODDAMNNNNNN The MC is very refreshing. He's a transmigrator who uses his BRAIN, he's also different from the 'I have to keep the story going' because he's actually the MC lmaoooo! We love a straight to gay novel. Reallyyy love the concept so far!!

Okay, it's time to go to school.

ya Tuhan... Selena

"Tobi was bout to explain why he wanted to take over the world." I say, trying to change the topic.

"Have you been thinking about taking the next step?" Christine, ever the gossip, asks.

"Their running wild this time. It's time to made some cleaning"

this was a GREAT story but the author ruins it like always as he tried to nurf the mc !!!!!!first there was a lot of flaws with the novel overall but it was still acceptable as it was a really great story, the biggest being the mc personality and overall just him as a person he was a COMPLETE idiot and the author didn’t do much to really try to improve him like most definitely would, he got certain skills to suppress his MANY flaws but that just made him more stupid in fact it’s this very reason how this story got ruined basically mc try’s to be superman and be a hero but unlike most heroes he isn’t smart he doesn’t plan before acting he never considered failure with is considered death and much more so basically he try’s to play hero he accomplished his task instead of retreating after he infiltrated the enemies base even after noticing the HUGE strength gap he doesn’t retreat instead he fought and got killed whats worse is author revived him in the body of a monster but wait it gets worse he's now a GOBLIN yes people a goddamn goblin with absolutely no stats and his system in hiatus he even ate bugs thinking **** like maybe it taste good 😕 WHO THE HELL IS THIS STUPID it isn’t physical possible to be so stupid unless he was retarded which obviously he’s not as both magic and cultivation makes you smarter in which he does BOTH 🤦🏼u200d♂️🤦🏼u200d♂️🤦🏼u200d♂️👎🏼 it was a terrible excuse for the author to nerf the mc i cannot believe i wasted my time on this utter trash giving stones a day even on non release days as i was an absolute fanboy i mean dude any monster i mean it literally could have been anything BUT A GODDAMN HIDEOUS ASS GOBLIN ?? im disappointed at least now i’ll know to be cautious with original novels you can’t trust these 2bit authors such as these 🙄🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻