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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

If you enjoy a vanilla story with a yandere girlfriend, this novel might be for you. This novel also features an interesting antagonist, Penny Prince. I just hope the author doesn't kill off that character too soon. The novel follows Ren Ross, who possesses an extra character that was killed by her fiancé, Lilith, in the original story. As the third son of a minor noble family, at the beginning of the story, Ren starts training to become stronger. The MC doesn't have a system, which I'm glad for, as it often makes things too easy for the protagonist. The beginning of the story is a bit weak, introducing a power system where some people receive gifts. The MC obtained bloodbinding after a trial. His fiancée has a divine gift that interferes with souls. Due to her lack of emotional control, she can kill people just by touching them, which makes many people afraid of her and leads her to become a villainess. To prevent his own future death and his fiancée from becoming a villainess, the MC begins to rehabilitate her. In the process, his fiancée becomes possessive and obsessed with the MC. The MC is smart and cunning but still makes some mistakes and is almost killed many times by the brilliance of Penny Prince, which keeps the story in suspense. Honestly, Penny Prince is more intriguing as a character than the MC, lol. Perhaps the author should consider focusing more on the villain's story later on.

Every webnovel reader wants something great and this is a pure replica of what they want. Great job author.

Good Job author keep it up ,it's Breath of fresh air..

It's a very interesting story. The character of Justice is more like a bastard best friend than a system character.😂😂🤣🤣 really I like it that's story 😍😍😍😍😍😍

A pretty great story, looking forward to more chapters!

"Okay, Carl, you're a smart and good kid, why are you doing this?"

As they walked inside after tying the wagon to a post, They saw the place wasn't very busy which is unusual for a tavern in a city at midday, As they approached the counter, The local barkeeper Brenn came up to them, He was a short man (Only about 5 and a half foot high) with short, Scruffy brown hair, A beard with a medium-length mustache above of which was his long, Almost hook-like nose with a long scar running down on the left side and onto apart of his cheek, A mark of his days in the Jazarian 4th Army, His eyes were a light brown colour, Although he was only 45 years of age, His eyes both had large bags of old age underneath of them, We wore a gray-black tunic with an off-white apron beneath it, Around his neck was a silver amulet with a small, Round gem affixed in the centre of it, "What'll be?" he asked them.