Yin Yang Saint of Athena

I haven't read a novel that has made me laugh this hard in a long time. not since I read Young Masters POV. honestly, peak comedy. my only complaint is that, though the writing quality is good, the story's structure is... how should I say this... somewhat feels incomplete. what do I mean? u might wonder. the first-person POV is not giving the story enough depth. the story focuses too much on the main character's POV, and in doing so, it makes other characters lack depth and makes the story bland. like now in his class, there are only 7 main students, and the more u read into the story, the more u will start to  believe that there are only 7 students in his class. I mean, at a point during the survival camp arc, he completely forgot to add Garrick and Cassandra and added them to some chapter layer as if they were there from the start. and that's the main cast. moving to other characters unless he's talking to them or mentions them, we know next to nothing about their lives or what they are plotting. plus foreshadowing doesn't work well with first-person POV, that's why authors third person and other povs, to add more depth into their novel's world and give the readers something to look forward to. I hope the author will address this issue, and trust me, the novel will become one of my favourites. for now, though it's  really funny, I won't call it a really good novel, Average at best, but has potential. it's still early for the author to fix this problem.

Great book although it's still in it's initial stages. It definitely has high potential. The writing quality is also Good. Please keep updating Author 🤝

" bawa panglima itu ke sana..layani dengan baik..

Naruto didn't say anything, but judging by the shaking of his shoulders and the wetness on his face it was something he needed to hear.

Lilly: Aw whenever you do that I blush.

I cracked my knuckles and pushed my hands into my pockets. I still had twenty seconds left.

The storyline is quite unique and it immediately piqued my mind. Though generally I don't prefer this genre but this novel changed my views completely. The story development is also quite good and at pace.Keep your hard work on! Good luck!

There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system,  However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.