Violet's story

They all lunged at Rou who was standing with his huge battle Axe. His armor was specifically designed for his skill so it also became big with him.

Writing Quality: 5I’m not an native nor have I spoken English for a extremely long time so I can’t really judge a novel on it’s grammar and stuff. Didn’t notice any problems though so 5/5Stability of Updating: 4Well, I don’t have much to say about this. 7+ch/week like promised. Did have a minor issue a while ago but Author promised us it won’t happen again. So that’s why it’s a 4 instead of a 54/5Story Development: 5The speed is neither too slow or too fast. Spending just enough time in the targets’ world to not see it as a passing side story and really get connected with all the characters in that world, but also not too slow to the point where it get repetitive and boring. It hit the sweet spot right in between.Character Design: 5All the characters are well thought out. They aren’t just flat characters which can be described in one sentence, but feel more like normal humans with complex thoughts. **Personal opinion**(more like me just being a fan girl  (but I’m a man so should it be fan man? Nahh doesn’t sound right. Fan boy that’s it))I really really reaaaaallyy love how the grandmother that took care of the MC was written. I actually felt tears welling up in my eyes. 5/5(+infinite for grandma)World Background: 5The world was well thought out, and so was the system. Don’t really have lots to say about World Background because I don’t know how to judge a story where the MC is constantly traveling to other worlds. Decided I couldn’t really penalize the overall score because of my inability to give a proper review, so yeah. 5/5Overall: 4.8Really happy I found this novel again. Really really happy. I mean it. Promise.

I expected some progress at chapter 460 maybe Odell loosening up & becoming a better dad & focusing on his kids not just on work & Tara, I expected Tara to have been outed & punished by now, at this point I think the author is just cash grabbing & will keep going knowing folk will continue to buy it