The Flower Offering

Nice effort but the plot moves way too fast. It does not develop its characters in the beginning or builds up to the conflict in the story. The story is rushed. The characters try to behave as though they are adults but are immature. Sexual reactions are rushed and abnormal. Sorry, keep trying.

Great story can’t wait to read the rest of it  Read this in two days I couldn’t put it down

Excellent story that was very well written. I was completely invested in the characters and what was going to happen next. I literally could not put it down!!!

I enjoyed this. Too bad about the massive cliffhanger ending

Nice one

I'm kinda exhausted reading this books to much info and too much online bickering like heyyy.....It's a waste of breath and time to mull over it. Also, too much cursing will cause so much disturbance to the reader. I hope the writer to read my comment. I really like this book even though fu Zhi meets a lot of trouble everywhere she goes I can understand that since she is the protagonist. She needs a lot of screen time hahha