The Dimension Ripper

Hi Author! I like the concept of your story, about academy and the MC's power. I think it will be like magic academy anime story, or like mashel. Keep up the good work!

The story itself is rather enjoyable. Rather quick paced with very little to no filler. He basically gets a day of rest before he needs to go back into action. The universe isn’t overly unique, but still fairly developed. The side characters aren’t super devloped. They feel more like place holders while the MC does his thing. The most glaring issues are the terrible grammar and continuity. Plural and conjugation errors abound. Definitely in need of a proofreader. People and things are spelt one way then changed mid chapter. And then there are random ramblings interjected in the middle of the story for no explicable reason. Final thoughts: interesting without the usual tropes of most cultivation novels. Which this is, it’s just set in space with science and technology.

Finally, she broke her gaze to study the water. Her eyes absentmindedly wandered until it settled on something. On its surface, a girl with a face dusted with freckles stared back at her. She had ordinary features: a small nose, thin lips, unshapely brows, and a chin that protruded a bit too much. Her eyes were large but still and unfeeling. It made one want to gauge them out.

i am lucy jones....

"You're making fun of me! Why is everyone treats me like this?" Chass felt really bad to himself. His loveliness didn't work with these persons. No matter what he did.

I am very much reminded of .... D.GraymanAm I alone on this? 😅 Not really sure why but I always seem to compare certain aspects of the story to the anime... White-hair, dark-magician father, and the atmosphere of the world. :3

Baked Potato RecipePreheat the oven to 300°F (150°C). Scrub the potato, and pierce the skin several times with a knife or fork. Rub the skin with olive oil, then with salt. Place the potato in the preheated oven, and bake for 90 minutes, or until slightly soft and golden brown. Slice the potato down the center, and serve with butter and black pepper. Sprinkle shredded Cheddar cheese over the top, if desired.I haven’t really read this novel, but I’ve seen it at front page and felt pity as it has more than 50 chapters already and only 2 reviews as of now. So, here it is. Good luck author, keep up your hard work! Don’t lose hope, hold on, persevere, keep going at it! Actually, I may even try reading this novel after all.

love this. I cannot believe I actually liked reading this as a male. I usually read romantic stories but this was new and something great. I really hope the author is able to write more on this. Its great thought, if really is.