The Death Simulation

The story feel so fastpaced but its actually not, after 11 chapter. All i can grasp is the fl personality and other character who seems to have a great role in the future maybe... But i was hoping that this novel will turn well and exceeded my expectation.

Okay this is a review after chapter 117The only flaw in the novel is that the progress is a bit slow but the details and character building, both main and side, are accurate and the story and writing style are really integrated together.The novel is very enjoyable and the drama in it and the family relationships are very nice and give a refreshing feelingContinue

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a banger novel with superb writing quality 🔥🐊

Author let me tell you why you boycotted your own story at first for the early chapters, (I read until chap 27)can't speak about later chapters since I haven't read them, the wish thing is too big of a way to ask for power or destruction or whatever,  the story's title is too big most of all when he doesn't get a speck as omniscient as I and many thought, I didn't want him op, but to me he feels too weak for what he asked, I can look past all that, very minor problems at the end if the Mc is good and interesting , that is the problem, you made reading him spiritually painful , he is very stupid, by plot if i understand and that is bad because reading what  an idiotic character does is very irritating, you didn't even tell us why, you should have explained that clearly, maybe with a system window that he couldn't see at least then I would have had a reason to continue but you gave him the worst possible  handicap being stupid and you gave the reason 50 chapters later?!!!? If you make a character like that and expect people to bear it for 1/4 of the story then I am sorry but I am out  if you made him physically very weak but perceptive and cunning and with a helping secondary character (his sister, his cat, etc. ) that could help him fight and carry out the plans he strategizes it would have been an entirely different look but as I said you gave him the worst possible trait, making reading him insufferable

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