Story of a legend

Eathon seeks revenge against a god who took his mother. He is crazy driven to get stronger as quickly as he can to kill someone who he still may not beat. In fantasy world with only his two \"\"\"\"wives\"\"\"\" start their journey.

Please give me advice I just started writing after getting inspired by some light novels and manga. I don\'t know how my schedule will be because I\'m still in highschool and after I\'m done with spring break I\'ll need to study

Ps sorry for the bad description, and there are going to be sex scenes in this novel along with gruesome fights so this is my warning.