Spring Blooms When I'm with You

An honest review from a fellow author.The Word building in the first ten chapters is enough to give the novel a solid foundation as they include ample clues about the setting being based around Roman mythology and martial cultivation with a strong revenge theme laying the groundwork for a villainous MC's rise to power.Evidence suggests that you're writing in Russian and translating to English either personality or with AI assistance. Part of chapter 4 is in Russian, and the mother's name switched languages once or twice. Careful with using AI tools, could affect contract considerations.Still rather readable overall. Translator for Super  Gene 2 can't even keep genders straight.The premise is solid and I look forward to seeing where you take the story and how you flesh in the cultivation system as you mix Roman mythos with Chinese cultivation elements.+1 on the cat girl maid. The descriptions are good but could be a little less wordy at times. Paragraph length and spacing could use improvements. (To fit better with WN/LN style and platform) Ie. Mobile friendly.As that is how most readers access the platform.  Still not that bad as is.

Good novel, mc is cool and on her way to becoming op.  Can't wait for more chapters!

Wow I’m amazed by this book, has such good storytelling and the typical Main character, the book just started so I can’t say much about it yet but it has a lot of potential. The only complaint I have about this book is probably the pacing but it isn’t all too bad, but the fights and action is very nice and captivating read, I also love the world building. I’m interested in this book and I hope the author keeps releasing chapters constantly

"So it is not love after all..." Shinjiro whispered.

Alisia - Yesterday when I reached home. Steven was already at my home . Mom invited him for a dinner.

Joe said in between "Karl we should take you to your house now. You will get better after resting for some days. Dan help me getting that cart from neighbours house so we can transfer Karl safely without opening his wound. Go now "

This masquerading that book publishers partake of is aggravating for a few reasons. It assumes that size matters and readers won't buy books that are not novels. This assumption leads to all sorts of smoke-and-mirrors tactics with font, point size, leading, and white space -- as publishers strive for that seemingly all-important 200-page length. They will also include unwanted introductory material and criticism; or they will publish several shorter pieces together. Meanwhile, publishers will compress long novels (especially classic novels) into as little paper as possible. Therefore, at a glance it will appear that Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre and its 1966 prequel Wide Sargasso Sea by Jean Rhys are more or less the same length. I understand that publishers are not capricious in their marketing strategies and that these practices are based on researching market trends, but it is still an aggravation for book lovers and would-be book buyers.

Cool good luck writing your new novel looking forward to reading it .