Soul Fragments

I have reviewed my own work . now it's your turn

This book is really good, simple and easy to understand. Every thing goes well so five star instead. I recommend to read it.

Nice story, the pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow either.the Mc's abilities are overpowered but stay within reason. they are also fun to play with. though when he got that nerve control skill I wonder why he never thought about increasing his reaction speed or even his perception of time, that would've been OP. all in all, it's a good read for a Naruto fanfic. keep it up!

"WOW, an egg pokemon, thank you very much" - said Dante while hugging his parents. "What kind of pokemon is it?" - continued the young man.

and slowly whispered in my ears "Ah!!you're finally here. You have kept me waiting. So how have you been??" I didn't even knew him so I was I supposed to react to that. I simply said that I've been good but do I know you. He looked surprised and took another look at me. Then he went towards the president who was not the president anymore. He talked to her briefly and then came back to me and said "never mind, we can always make new memories together. But first you need a haircut." After that I will show you around and then we will start practicing magic. Then he gave me a haircut himself. Just when I was thinking how could a great master be like this , my haircut was done. For a second I couldn't recognize myself. But I kept my calm. Then he told me that there ate total 3 sects in the place. The main hall is "The Hall of Joy". That is where I was supposed to live with master. Soon it was time for lunch. So master decided that since it's my first day here I can have lunch with him in the mess. As soon we reached there master....

"Hey, you're that round face girl from UA! What are you all doing here?"

[Fine, but remember what you can!]

Epsilon was nearby, he was sitting cross-legged on the same smooth stone surface she'd been lying on, gazing out at the clouds.