Skyrim: Dragonborn Within

an electrifying read from start to finish! The action sequences are intense, and the pacing keeps you hooked. You’ve done an amazing job creating a strong protagonist and building suspense throughout the story. looking forward to read.

It's certainly very well written, with a nicely established world background. There are a few grammatical errors, but the meaning gets across well enough. The proceedings are interesting, with a sustained tension, and the schemes and machinations involved are fun to read.I personally liked how a seemingly desperate situation was gradually overturned, all due to the efforts of the protagonist. The trials were also constructed well, making them seem like an important event, rather than a random examination that could have been covered in a chapter or two, as most hunter exams in novels tend to be. So many chapters spent covering hunter exams should normally be a negative, but in this case, it is quite the opposite.However, the character designs could have been handled better. For some reason, the author chooses to give sexual undertones to every interaction the protagonist has with a woman. They are always flirtatious in nature, with the protagonist reciprocating to a certain extent. Emotional infidelity is a complex topic, but I'm sure most would agree when I say that it's not fair to his wife. The male characters introduced are almost always either eccentric and mysterious, or simply irritating in his perception. It is a repetitive setup in this sense.This work hasn't been updated in a while, so I'm not sure whether it'll be continued, but the available chapters finished on a real high note. It undeniably arouses my curiosity, and I've been left with the feeling of wanting more.

And all that glitters is gold

In a nice and peaceful world of Arcania there were five continents.  Each of these continents sustain the balance of needed.  And it is always a peaceful place.

        When they got back to the camp, SnowFlake led him into the medicine den and had him sit down while she went and got RavenPool. When she returned, she had RavenPool look at ShockrimPaw's paw, and when RavenPool gasped, SnowFlake and ShockrimPaw were both confused.

Emiya crashes through the door only to see the beowulf swallow his sister. Before she swallowed completely she tells him "...." Then, she's gone

Blake:

Just by pressing the semen-filled stomach slightly, the cloudy liquid flies out far away vigorously as if she's ejaculating. It's slightly interesting