Rise of Sin

Fifty something chapters in I am very impressed. So far this is better than Terra Nova online. The author is really getting better.

To be honest, the writing style is incredibly impressive. It only lacks two things, you need to learn how to write high paced enganging fight scenes and your writing lacks... i dont know how to put it, emotion? Make your charcters do what an actual person would have done. More depth, human like or relatable decisions and personality, then it would be perfect.

It is one of the best plot I have ReadThe creator is trying his best Missing Fantasy, Cultivation, Action and Adventure with a little bit of Sci-FiNormally Jux one genre Is enough to get Your attention But He Mixed all to get this masterpiece, Let's See How it Goes I think This is just Volume 1I give the writer a thumbs up on thisKeep Going

This novel is amazing! I’ve never been so hooked on a story before. The way you write is just perfect, and the characters feel so real. Harshit is my favorite—he’s strong, clever, and always surprises me with his abilities. Every time he appears, I get excited because I know something cool is going to happen. I love how his powers keep growing and how he handles tough situations. Keep up the great work! I can’t wait to read more .

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Kai walked around checking the condition of the people in the city randomly.

"Sorry for worrying you, and I'm fine by the way, just an odd dream I got or might be a nightmare."

just when it was getting interesting you stop ignore the haters just be you and write what you want to...….