Re: Start

It's fun to read. The story itself has a fast pace and is not lacking in action scenes. It has its own problems, mainly character interactions feeling stoney, but the author has recognized this fact and aims to improve upon it in the future. The mc fits the tags well as far as I see the story going. He is a villain, and he is ruthless. It seems he is beginning to embody an immortal's view on mortals based on the latest chapters I've read (at the time of this review, chapter 13).His companion, Little Red, was an entertaining character at the beginning, and his interactions with the mc felt more natural than the rest, but his temperment seems to have changed suddenly as soon as he gained the intelligence to speak. Whereas before Little Red may have been described as a mischievous little brother/friend, he now seems to act more like a lackey to a gang leader (the mc).It's a good book for anyone looking for a ruthless and prideful mc.

As he hadn't linked with it, correspondingly, he was unable to obtain cultivation arts from the sun, however, his Stardust number increased, which in turn increased the time duration of usage of his current cultivation arts: Moonlight Tiara.

I put my phone into my pocket. I close my eyes and start taking a deep breath.

But something dawned on her. If the outside really looked like how it did, then why does the inside look the opposite of that. Her instincts told her that it wasn't safe to stay here, despite it's appearance. Someone or something did this on purpose, and it sure wasn't to lure people in.

"Oh you can use everything in your disposal because the artifact can always determine your own fighting strengths but if you can be tactical about it, I guess that will help you attain a better score. In the case of this test taking too long, let us worry about that and just do your part. We promise that the result will be posted tomorrow morning. As for the passing score, if you can get a 300 or higher then you will pass." ( Mrs. Porter)

Mia: I just realised that I need to head back, I need to cover my shift at the store.

*clank*

Eve: This is the place.