New world, welcomes the overlord( hiatus)

So far this story is good. But there are some improvements that can be made. Try and make chapters a bit longer. Story is getting a bit too fast paced so try and slow things down. Other than that it’s good. It had a lot of good potential

Author for the novel here, i got nothing to say really, hope you enjoy the book im just here to post this art i've received from theothecolossal on twitter :D will post more art here for all to see if i recieve anymore from fans or future collabs.

love the story, has some interesting parts, overall it's a good story though I'll read this later cuz in my free time

It looks promising, I like how it follows. It's well structured, the characters are interesting, and the setting looks cool. The quality isn't bad at all, considering that apparently this is your second work and you started it recently, so my assessment is that it's very good.

good one don't judge by just reading starting chapters it gets better every chapter slowly and he will soon get more powers then anyone...........

Black Spider is too shocked to be able to counteract it before he's whisked off his feet.

In this story mavis and zeref don’t have to have had a child

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?